Well if you want to improove, first you need to work on your body proportions. Akira-kun (not chan cause it's like giving her secret away -.^) head is too big compared to the rest of her body and the top of it is too flat... Takumi's proportions are well done. Only his face is too flat for an anime character.

You're slowly getting there though, don't give up!

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Whence in fire I was born, to that I shall return. Consuming myself in thy flame and be reborn from thy ashes

I think that akira's rip clothes already show her secret

Hello Marie ! Ca va ?
Ton dessin est trop bien !
Smack !
Tchao !


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1) jadore ton avatar, fé tourné lol
2) jadore comment tu fé les pantalon ><

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!! My-Hime!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very good idea of drawing this nd they look like them self!!!!!!!!!!!! very nice!!!!!!!

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HAPPY BUNNY-->Your ugly...nd thats sad

Thank you . I also like your drawings of My-Hime.

thanks!

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Hello hey Mewwy Cwismas evewybody!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HAPPY BUNNY-->Your ugly...nd thats sad

I love Akira and Takumi..can't..stop..crying!!!

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I felt the same when i had just seen this anime . My two favorites moment were when takumi-kun entered in the bathroom . And another moment i looove is when mikoto say "humai" an then change it in "mai"... I can't stop crying !!! lol
(sorry for my english )